From 7af5e26383e3213eda744cff3f55d4c49cd3936d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Oct 2010 12:03:52 -0700
Subject: Edits as described below:

1) Wording change based on Darren's input of making Linux kernel sound like the only open source part of YL

2) Removal of the "v" option for the tar command example.

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
---
 documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to 'documentation/yocto-project-qs')

diff --git a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
index 3f2f73788a..dbca724eea 100644
--- a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
+++ b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
 
     <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-            <para>Provides an open source Linux kernel along with a set of system commands and libraries suitable for the embedded environment.</para>
+            <para>Provides a recent Linux kernel along with a set of system commands and libraries suitable for the embedded environment.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
             <para>Makes available system components such as X11, Matchbox, GTK+, Pimlico, Clutter,
@@ -136,10 +136,10 @@
         </para>
 
             <literallayout class='monospaced'>
-     sudo apt-get install sed wget cvs subversion git-core coreutils 
-     unzip texi2html texinfo libsdll.2-dev docbook-utils gawk 
-     python-pysqlite2 diffstat help2man make gcc build-essential 
-     g++ desktop-file-utils chrpath libgl1-mesa-dev libglu1-mesa-dev 
+     $ sudo apt-get install sed wget cvs subversion git-core coreutils \
+     unzip texi2html texinfo libsdll.2-dev docbook-utils gawk \
+     python-pysqlite2 diffstat help2man make gcc build-essential \
+     g++ desktop-file-utils chrpath libgl1-mesa-dev libglu1-mesa-dev \
      libsdl1.2-dev
             </literallayout>
 
@@ -200,13 +200,13 @@
          </para>
 
          <para><emphasis>NOTE:</emphasis>  The build process using Sato currently consumes 50GB of disk space.
-             To allow for vbariations in the build process and for future package expansion we recommend 100GB of free disk space.
+             To allow for variations in the build process and for future package expansion we recommend 100GB of free disk space.
          </para>
 
          <para>
              <literallayout class='monospaced'>
      $ wget http://pokylinux.org/releases/poky-green-3.3.tar.bz2
-     $ tar xjvf poky-green-3.3.tar.bz2
+     $ tar xjf poky-green-3.3.tar.bz2
      $ source green-3.3/poky-init-build-env green-3.3-build
      $ cd green-3.3-build
      $ bitbake poky-image-sato
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
                  <para>
                      The next two commands create the directory and place you there.  
                      The build directory contains all the object files used during the build.   
-                     The default build directory is poky-dir/build.  
+                     The default build directory is <command>poky-dir/build</command>.  
                      Note that you can change the target architecture by editing the 
                      <command>&lt;build_directory&gt;/conf/local.conf</command> file. 
                      By default the target architecture is qemux86. 
@@ -236,13 +236,13 @@
              </listitem>
              <listitem>
                  <para>
-                     The bitbake command builds the OS image for the target.  
+                     The <command>$bitbake</command> command builds the OS image for the target.  
                      Here poky-image-sato is the name of the target.
                  </para>
              </listitem>
              <listitem>
                  <para>
-                     Finally, the poky-qemu command launches the customized QEMU.
+                     Finally, the <command>$poky-qemu</command> command launches the customized QEMU.
                  </para>
              </listitem>
          </itemizedlist>
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